Zukah - Revision history

Marr0w at 13:07, 10 August 2015

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Marr0w at 21:39, 24 May 2015

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Caliga at 21:32, 24 May 2015

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Zukah at 21:21, 24 May 2015

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Zukah at 21:13, 24 May 2015

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Caliga at 21:00, 24 May 2015

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Caliga at 20:51, 24 May 2015

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Caliga at 20:51, 24 May 2015

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Caliga at 20:48, 24 May 2015

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Marr0w at 01:06, 8 April 2015

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 ==Notes==
-This character is easily mistaken for the Dragonball Ascendants character [[Zukah_1.0]]'. Unfortunately, there can only be one.
+This character is easily mistaken for the original [[Dragonball Ascendants]] character [[Zukah_1.0|Zukah (v1.0)]]. Unfortunately, there can only be one.
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 SUPERHUMAN ABILITY = 0: Zukah has the ability to tap into the dormant ki of vegetables and cause them to combust. Each variety of vegetable has a different effect when charged, (potatoes=grenades, onions=tear gas, carrots=rockets, etc), though none are particularly dangerous on their own.
-|Logs={{Template:Logs-Pre-U}}
+|Logs={{Template:Logs-Twisted}}
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 ==Background==

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 |Weight=740lbs
 |Short=A hulking 740 lbs of jaundiced green muscle, fat and warts, Zukah stands at seven feet, three inches tall (and more than half of that wide). The beast glares at the world with bloodshot yellow eyes from beneath a massive, wrinkled set of brows. He is balding, yet what hair remains is worn long and resembles the strings of an old and abused mop. It is a fading blonde, as is the thick unkempt beard that seems to double as a napkin for the brute. He has a faintly sour smell about him in the best of times.
-|Desc=You see nothing special.
+|Desc=A hulking 740 lbs of jaundiced green muscle, fat and warts, Zukah stands at seven feet, three inches tall (and more than half of that wide). The beast glares at the world with bloodshot yellow eyes from beneath a massive, wrinkled set of brows. He is balding, yet what hair remains is worn long and resembles the strings of an old and abused mop. It is a fading blonde, as is the thick unkempt beard that seems to double as a napkin for the brute. He has a faintly sour smell about him in the best of times.
 |Skills=Zukah has remarkable durability and superhuman strength. He is also an expert at improvisation.
 |Stats=PHYSICAL ABILITY = 6: Though once a member of the highly-trained military elite of his home world, Zukah has gone to seed for decades. A thick layer of fat has settled over the once-impressive muscles, making him slower, less flexible yet able to soak up more punishment with his “natural cushioning.” Beneath the fat, solid muscle still remains dormant.
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 MAGICAL KNOWLEDGE = 2: Has many theories of how fake magic that doesn’t actually exist works (garnered from comic books and tabletop RPG booklets). Doesn’t understand practical magic at all.
-SUPERHUMAN ABILITY = 0: None whatsoever, including the ki energy that his race and culture was so proficient in.
+SUPERHUMAN ABILITY = 0: Zukah has the ability to tap into the dormant ki of vegetables and cause them to combust. Each variety of vegetable has a different effect when charged, (potatoes=grenades, onions=tear gas, carrots=rockets, etc), though none are particularly dangerous on their own.
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 |Age=87
 |Birthdate=December 26
-|Height=8'3"
+|Height=7'3"
-|Weight=1,240lbs
+|Weight=740lbs
-|Short=A hulking 1,240 lbs of jaundiced green muscle, fat and warts, Zukah stands at eight feet, three inches tall (and more than half of that wide). The beast glares at the world with bloodshot yellow-green eyes from beneath a massive, hairless set of brows. He is balding, yet what hair remains is worn long and resembles the strings of an old and abused mop. It is a fading blonde, as is the thick unkempt beard that seems to double as a napkin for the brute. He has a faintly sour smell about him in the best of times.
+|Short=A hulking 740 lbs of jaundiced green muscle, fat and warts, Zukah stands at seven feet, three inches tall (and more than half of that wide). The beast glares at the world with bloodshot yellow eyes from beneath a massive, wrinkled set of brows. He is balding, yet what hair remains is worn long and resembles the strings of an old and abused mop. It is a fading blonde, as is the thick unkempt beard that seems to double as a napkin for the brute. He has a faintly sour smell about him in the best of times.
 |Desc=You see nothing special.
 |Skills=Zukah has remarkable durability and superhuman strength. He is also an expert at improvisation.
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 |}}<br />
 ==Background==
-A hulking 1,240 lbs of jaundiced green muscle, fat and warts, Zukah stands at eight feet, three inches tall (and more than half of that wide). The beast glares at the world with bloodshot yellow-green eyes from beneath a massive, hairless set of brows. He is balding, yet what hair remains is worn long and resembles the strings of an old and abused mop. It is a fading blonde, as is the thick unkempt beard that seems to double as a napkin for the brute. He has a faintly sour smell about him in the best of times.
+A hulking 740 lbs of jaundiced green muscle, fat and warts, Zukah stands at seven feet, three inches tall (and more than half of that wide). The beast glares at the world with bloodshot yellow-green eyes from beneath a massive, hairless set of brows. He is balding, yet what hair remains is worn long and resembles the strings of an old and abused mop. It is a fading blonde, as is the thick unkempt beard that seems to double as a napkin for the brute. He has a faintly sour smell about him in the best of times.
 Zukah is a member of a race of fanged extraterrestrials called Halians, which have the ability to use the unique inherent elasticity of their cellular structure to alter their forms by means of Kyodaika, which renders them roughly triple their original size, strength and speed. Kyodaika also effects other minor changes to their physiology (most impressive amongst them being dagger-like claws, enlarged fangs, darker skin and the conversion of all fat tissue to muscle mass). That is... normally.
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 The giants rushed him to their home and healed him, replenishing the blood in his veins with Mejora's while mending his body. They used him to retrieve a cache of treasure for them, located down a path much too small for their massive bodies to fit inside a fortress left behind by a long-dead visiting alien species. Afterwards, the giants repaid him as he wished: instead of a share in their loot, he merely wished to travel to a planet as far away from the empty patch of sky that used to be Halia as possible. They were happy to oblige him with a piece of junk spacecraft too small for them anyway.
-And that is how Zukah came to arrive on Earth. The journey was long and lonely and left him to his own thoughts. He has never been the same since. Upon crashing to the ground, Zukah immediately embarked on a frantic quest to erase every thought in his fractured mind through all of the substance abuse he could possibly endure. Along the way he discovered rock 'n' roll music, television, alcohol and humankind. Fast forward through an era unprecedented in Earth's history; an era that largely went unnoticed by the massive Halian in the thralls of his vices and his slowly unravelling sanity, and now Zukah enters this RP as the beast he is today.
+And that is how Zukah came to arrive on Earth. The journey was long and lonely and left him to his own thoughts. He has never been the same since. Upon crashing to the ground, Zukah immediately embarked on a frantic quest to erase every thought in his fractured mind through all of the substance abuse he could possibly endure. Along the way he discovered rock 'n' roll music, television, alcohol and humankind. Fast forward through an era unprecedented in Earth's history; an era that largely went unnoticed by the massive Halian in the thralls of his vices and his slowly unravelling sanity, and now Zukah enters this RP as the man he is today.
-Zukah is a veteran of several wars and suffers from flashbacks and alcoholism, amongst other maladies. He is sometimes gripped by mild dementia which distorts his perceptions of himself and his surroundings into a more palpable (or at least familiar) reality.
+Zukah is a veteran of several wars and suffers from flashbacks and an addictive personality, amongst other maladies. He is sometimes gripped by mild dementia which distorts his perceptions of himself and his surroundings into a more palpable (or at least familiar) reality.
-Always an outcast amongst his own people, Zukah now believes himself to be the last of the Halians and is at a loss as to how to deal with it. He's awakened recently to find himself living in the slums of an Earth city, and evidence suggests that he's been there for the better portion of the past decade (his conflicting memories of arriving there are varied and untrustworthy). Rock 'n' roll music, alcohol and junk food are, he feels, Earth's greatest natural resources. He hates young people.
+Always an outcast amongst his own people, Zukah now believes himself to be the last of the Halians and is at a loss as to how to deal with it. He's been hiding out on the planet Earth for more than half a century trying to figure it out, until only recently realizing that he had wasted decades of his life. Now he has emerged into the world, for better or for worse. Rock 'n' roll music, alcohol and junk food are, he feels, Earth's greatest natural resources.
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 ==Notes==
-This character is easily mistaken for the Dragonball Ascendants Character Zukah. Unfortunately, there can only be one.
+This character is easily mistaken for the Dragonball Ascendants character 'Zukah'. Unfortunately, there can only be one.
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