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OrbisFactor: WARNING: LEWD LANGUAGE Josuke is officially so hot even the guys want him! Zombie'd and sent after Josuke by Dio, Venom Prisoner decides he wants to keep Josuke for himself! After the battle, Ponset comes by to talk about Hamon with Zeppeli.

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*WARNING: LEWD LANGUAGE* Josuke is officially so hot even the guys want him! Zombie'd and sent after Josuke by Dio, Venom Prisoner decides he wants to keep Josuke for himself! After the battle, Ponset comes by to talk about Hamon with Zeppeli.

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 And sure enough, this time it's going to be another bad time.  It starts simply enough.  Josuke calls forth Crazy Diamond again, for a barrage of punches.
-<font color="ff005f">"DORARARARARARARARA!"</font>
+<b><font color="ff005f">"DORARARARARARARARA!"</font></b>
 But something is different this time.  Crazy Diamond doesn't stop.  At all.  It just keeps pummelling at Venom Prisoner.  Josuke is hoping that the damage will just utterly break the zombie.  Why?  So he can fix it, of course.  Fix it <b>wrong</b>!
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 <b><font color="d7d700">"CRAZY DIAMOND!"</font></b>
-Josuke is in no shape mentally to concentrate on fixing the zombie's broken body properly.  He is angry, more than a little freaked out, Hopefully the zombie won't be able to regeneration parts that aren't actually 'broken' anymore, even if they're 'fixed' in the wrong places...
+Josuke is in no shape mentally to concentrate on fixing the zombie's broken body properly.  He is angry, and more than a little freaked out.  Hopefully the zombie won't be able to regeneration parts that aren't actually 'broken' anymore, even if they're 'fixed' in the wrong places...

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 That strange, enormous man never slows down even a bit! Doesn't he ever get tired!?
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 "Yes! Dio-sama, the loveliest man in all the world, brought me back to life after I received the death sentence! But no matter how beautiful, one man is never enough to satisfy me!" the... yeah, it's definitely a zombie, explains. And then...
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 <b><font color="ff005f">"DORARARARA!"</font></b>
-Those fists really hurt -- Jotaro's Star Platinum can (eventually) break through diamond-hard substances, and even HE was impressed at the power of Josuke's Stand.  So it's not likely to feel great if Venom Prisoner <b>does</b> get hit while he's falling.
+Those fists really hurt -- Jotaro's Star Platinum can (eventually) break through diamond-hard substances, and even <b>he</b> was impressed at the power of Josuke's Stand.  So it's not likely to feel great if Venom Prisoner <b>does</b> get hit while he's falling.
 Hit or miss, Josuke is getting the hell out of the way!  He jumps back, just staying out of arm's reach.  He knows that V.P.'s leaping is going to make anywhere in the immediate area 'in range', technically, but he just wants to stay out of immediate grabbing range.

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−	Josuke's eye twitches when the man just plows through every wall in his way... and then again when the weird guy calls him 'cutie'. So apparently weirdos DO break into guys' apartments too. ~~But~~ for the same reasons! Then something is said that makes Josuke freeze utterly.	+	Josuke's eye twitches when the man just plows through every wall in his way... and then again when the weird guy calls him 'cutie'. So apparently weirdos <b>do</b> break into guys' apartments too. And for all the same reasons! Then something is said that makes Josuke freeze utterly.

	'Dio'.		'Dio'.

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 {{Logsummary|
 Title    = Venom's Prisoner
-|Summary = *WARNING: LEWD LANGUAGE* '''[[Josuke]]''' is officially so hot even the guys want him!  Zombie'd and sent after Josuke by '''[[Dio]]''', '''''Venom Prisoner''''' decides he wants to keep Josuke for himself!  After the battle, '''[[Ponset]]'' comes by to talk about Hamon with Zeppeli.
+|Summary = '''''WARNING: LEWD LANGUAGE!''''' '''[[Josuke]]''' is officially so hot even the guys want him!  Zombie'd and sent by '''[[Dio]]''' to kill him, '''Venom Prisoner''' decides he wants to keep Josuke for himself instead!  After the battle, '''[[Ponset]]''' comes by to talk about Hamon with '''Zeppeli'''.
 |Who     = [[Josuke]], Venom Prisoner, Baron Zeppeli (emitted by [[Dio]]), [[Ponset]]
 |Date    = May 9, 2016

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 One broken window and a loud shriek later, and a half-dressed Josuke is running down the hall, having grabbed the clothes he'd laid out on his way out of the apartment.  He pauses just long enough to hop into his pants (oh geez, somebody is so totally gonna report him for streaking... but HEY he had a towel wrapped around him!).  Instead of aiming for the stairs, though, Josuke aims right for the far wall.  It looks like he's going to run right into it... but then the blue-armored pink figure appears...
-<span style="color:ff005f">"DORARARARARARA!"</span>
+<b><font color="ff005f">"DORARARARARARA!"</font></b>
 The wall explodes, and Josuke leaps out the hole in the wall, pulling a tank top on.  The wall fixes itself behind him.  Hopefully that'll buy him some time.  He lands in a roll, dust sticking to his still-wet arms, panting slightly.  "Geeeez, that was scary," he mutters.  "Weirdos aren't supposed to break into <b>guys'</b> apartments, are they?"
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 Well, this is one weirdo who is not only breaking into the apartment, but right <b>through</b> it, smashing down wall after wall as he chases Josuke outside. Even the wall Crazy Diamond just fixed is no match for this intruder's might, as he simply plows through it like it wasn't there!
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-"Waaaaiiiit! Come back, cutie, I escaped from prison just to see you~ <3" the hulking monster of a man calls after the teen, his feet leaving deep imprints in the floor with every step. And if Josuke turns to look, sure enough, this <b>thing</b> -- it's too huge to be an ordinary man! -- is definitely wearing prisoner garb, including an iron ball chained to his ankle that isn't slowing him down in the slightest!
+"Waaaaiiiit! Come back, cutie, I escaped from prison just to see you~ <font color="red"><3</font>" the hulking monster of a man calls after the teen, his feet leaving deep imprints in the floor with every step. And if Josuke turns to look, sure enough, this <b>thing</b> -- it's too huge to be an ordinary man! -- is definitely wearing prisoner garb, including an iron ball chained to his ankle that isn't slowing him down in the slightest!
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 "That beautiful star-shaped birthmark on the back of your neck... it's just like Dio-sama said! But I don't want to kill you, I just want to keep you forever and ever~"
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 "Yes! Dio-sama, the loveliest man in all the world, brought me back to life after I received the death sentence! But no matter how beautiful, one man is never enough to satisfy me!" the... yeah, it's definitely a zombie, explains. And then...
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 BAM!
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 He takes a flying leap, crushing a crater into the floor with the force of it, quickly crossing the distance between himself and Josuke at impossible speeds!  "And that's why I, Venom Prisoner, have chosen yooooouuuuu to be my next lover~!"
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-<span style="color:ff0000"><3</span>
+<b><font color="ff0000"><3</font></b>
 Walls may not offer too much resistance to Venom Prisoner's advances, but how about a wall of arm and fist?  If Venom Prisoner's in the air, it's going to be hard to dodge, Josuke figures.  So as soon as the oddly insistent man gets in range, <b>before</b> he actually hits the floor, Josuke calls Crazy Diamond.
-<span style="color:ff005f">"DORARARARA!"</span>
+<b><font color="ff005f">"DORARARARA!"</font></b>
 Those fists really hurt -- Jotaro's Star Platinum can (eventually) break through diamond-hard substances, and even HE was impressed at the power of Josuke's Stand.  So it's not likely to feel great if Venom Prisoner <b>does</b> get hit while he's falling.
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-"WWWWWWRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY!" the zombie prisoner screeches as he descends upon Josuke, mouth full of fangs bared as his massive arms reach out, grabbing at the youth like the claws of a predator pouncing upon its prey!
+"<b>WWWWWWRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYY!</b>" the zombie prisoner screeches as he descends upon Josuke, mouth full of fangs bared as his massive arms reach out, grabbing at the youth like the claws of a predator pouncing upon its prey!
 BAM! POW! KABOOM!
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 So, as Venom Prisoner closes in on the downed teen, what will his would-be victim do!? Josuke, just what are you planning!?
-"Heheheh... I'm gonna have lots of fun with you, sweetie~ <span style="color:ff0000"><3</span>" the zombie says, his words filled with triumph! This is the chance Josuke is waiting for, as those clawed hands reach for him once more!
+"Heheheh... I'm gonna have lots of fun with you, sweetie~ <b><font color="ff0000"><3</font></b>" the zombie says, his words filled with triumph! This is the chance Josuke is waiting for, as those clawed hands reach for him once more!
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 And sure enough, this time it's going to be another bad time.  It starts simply enough.  Josuke calls forth Crazy Diamond again, for a barrage of punches.
-<span style="color:ff005f">"DORARARARARARARARA!"</span>
+<font color="ff005f">"DORARARARARARARARA!"</font>
 But something is different this time.  Crazy Diamond doesn't stop.  At all.  It just keeps pummelling at Venom Prisoner.  Josuke is hoping that the damage will just utterly break the zombie.  Why?  So he can fix it, of course.  Fix it <b>wrong</b>!
-<span style="color:d7d700">"CRAZY DIAMOND!"</span>
+<b><font color="d7d700">"CRAZY DIAMOND!"</font></b>
 Josuke is in no shape mentally to concentrate on fixing the zombie's broken body properly.  He is angry, more than a little freaked out, Hopefully the zombie won't be able to regeneration parts that aren't actually 'broken' anymore, even if they're 'fixed' in the wrong places...
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 Himself, Josuke is suddenly enraged.  "I won't let you get away with that!" he declares.  Crazy Diamond looms over the Twisted Prisoner, rearing back a fist.
-<b><span style="color:ff005f">"DOOOORRRA!"</span></b>
+<b><font color="ff005f">"DOOOORRRA!"</font></b>
 The pavement beneath the Prisoner is broken.  Once.  Twice.  Again and again.  Only then does the Stand turn its attention to Venom Prisoner, pummeling the broken zombie with all the fury Josuke can muster.  The punching continues, until a final strike sends pieces of the pavement -- and of the Prisoner! -- into the air with an explosion.

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−	The wall explodes, and Josuke leaps out the hole in the wall, pulling a tank top on. The wall fixes itself behind him. Hopefully that'll buy him some time. He lands in a roll, dust sticking to his still-wet arms, panting slightly. "Geeeez, that was scary," he mutters. "Weirdos aren't supposed to break into <b>guys' apartments, are they?"	+	The wall explodes, and Josuke leaps out the hole in the wall, pulling a tank top on. The wall fixes itself behind him. Hopefully that'll buy him some time. He lands in a roll, dust sticking to his still-wet arms, panting slightly. "Geeeez, that was scary," he mutters. "Weirdos aren't supposed to break into <b>guys'</b> apartments, are they?"